Broken Promises
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Last published Thu, Sep 24, 2020
Broken Promises is a gripping short story of desire, love, betrayal, and truths revealed.
Venus Lupin is in her 6th year at Hogwarts with her twin brother Remus Lupin, she is best friends with the Mauraders, but considers them her brothers.
How far will Venus go to rebel against her brother's overprotectivness against all things dating?
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Illustration by October Caecilia
Story by October Caecilia
Most characters, The world, and plot lines were created by J.K Rowling
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