The commander
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Last published Mon, Sep 21, 2020
Set in an utopian community where a group of elders will decided a year in which a commander will be born and once they turn 25 they will be the protector.
For Rosalee this meant training everyday how to fight and lead her community.
But what she didn't know is that she would have to make the biggest sacrifice of her life.
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