Creepypasta OC Reviews (DISCONTINUED!)

Why am I doing this? No idea other than I'm bored.
Should I be doing this? Probably not.
Am I doing it? YES.
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This book is brought to you by Derp Steven.
Why Derp Steven? No clue.
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There will be a form in the first chapter. Also, I will be being completely honest, but I will also be gives constructive criticism.
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Ranks:
#580 in review