Eyeless Jack X Sharp Sarah(My own character)

Hey guys I'm back. This is my oc Sharp Sarah. I started the story before her 17th birthday when she will finally become Sharp Sarah. Please tell me if I should make more chapters. If you read the Smile Dog one, I might not continue but then again I might. I just had writers block until I started school and writing random stories. Well tell me what you think. I hope you enjoy my own Character X OC writing!