Falling For a Detective (Naegiri)

This going to be my first attempt at a Fan Fic, as all the Naegiri ones I have read finished not to my liking. (Nothing against them all, but I wish they didn't end.) So this story will be told through the eyes of Naegi, until it says someone else's POV. He is attending a new school, Hope's Peak (No murder games, just normal high school life), with a childhood best friend that he lost contact with when he moved, and is trying to find her. No it's not Kyoko, but said person is going to be his bestfriend later on and I really wouldn't want to write this without them here. Basic story. I am making this out of curiosity to see if I can possibly have a career in writing. Only positivity and constructive criticism. Thanks for stopping by! Possible NSFW, and some language.
Joe.