Uncontrollable(HUGE REMAKE)
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Last published Mon, Aug 24, 2015
I was born in an advance technology, where the robot is moving everywhere, where humans can control plants and trees, they can control animals, and even there own species too. It's just dreadful how things can control by humans with this automatic technology. But sometimes, there's something human can't control.
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In the years of 2100s, residents around the world use technology to control things, but if you're Uncontrollable, you won't get control by anyone. Uncontrollable is the most powerful humans in the world in this generation. Kezia Knight is known as one of them. Government wants to get rid of this human with extra-ordinary powers because they don't want to control by anybody. The biggest rule of the world is that they have to kill Uncontrollable as soon as possible. But this rule will change when.............
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