Elegy for the Night

There lived once a girl with eyes of red who was locked away. This was the princess of Deoir, the blind girl who played music all through the night.
In the same city, there lived once a boy who saw the world differently. This was the tailor's son, the finder of the Truth, who wrote his stories all through the night.
This is their tale, in the Land of Tears, on the western lands of the southern island of Halldin, among the coast of the Finnler sea, in the great world of Tasun.
Within their tale is tragedy, and love, and courage, and hope.
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