Heavy Rain
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DISCLAIMER: I wrote this for a short story assignment in eighth grade. Obviously, that was a long time ago and I just found it in the deep dark archives of my google docs. I have revised and rewritten it to fit my writing style and voice nowadays and sort of just make it...better. If there are any cheesy or bad writing elements...I blame it on eighth grade me.
Now without further ado...
Four, newly graduated teenagers want to spend their last summer vacation before college together so they plan an epic road trip. Each of the four friends get to choose one thing they would like to do along the road trip and one friend has a creepy idea of where to go. Logan, Harper, and Lance all drag their reluctant friend, Devon to a creepy ghost town in the middle of nowhere. Devon immediately gets a bad feeling about the place, but her friends disregard her warnings, determined to make the most of there last summer together.
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