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إغواء المافيا : لان وانغجي
"وي وشيان يُرسل إلى لان وانغجي لتعلم الانضباط... لكنه لم يكن يعلم أن لان وانغجي يرغب به بكل جرأة منذ اللحظة الأولى. سلطة، جاذبية، ورغبات لا تعرف الحدود."
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I beg to differ that.", I sassed and got out of his grip ready to move out of the room when he pulled me by my elbow and the next second I was pushed on the visitor's chair. He trapped me completely by keeping his palms on the arms of the chair. "I tried to tell you patiently.", I scoffed at his words. Patience and he don't go in a single sentence. He gripped my chin making me look into his eyes."Now listen carefully Miss, I want you for my niece as her babysitter. Tell me how much you'll take and we can seal the deal." This time it was me who blinked once, twice and thrice. "But I don't want to work for you." See the reason was absolutely clear. I liked the kid since the moment I met her but I hated this man from the moment I gazed into his eyes. "How much?" I frowned."You really think your money can make everyone dance on your tips?" "1200 dollars a week." I rolled my eyes making him lean towards me." 1500?" "Make it 15000 and still I won't work for you.", I retorted and pushed him. I walked to the door and gave him one glance."Next time when you talk to me, make sure you keep all your richness aside. That's one thing that I never want to see you again, you self-centred CEO." "We shall see." . . . Brave but lonely. Passionate but sensitive. That's Arielle Summers. For everyone, Money, Assets and happiness may be supreme but to her, self-respect is prime. Cold and reckless. Commanding and ruthless. That was Nicolas Arnold. He only cared for his niece, his Mama and his friends. Love life didn't exist until- she came into the picture. *No Toxic Relationship. No ex-crush/lover/fiance/wife. The male lead is the uncle of the child in this book, he's not a manwhore. There are no trust issues. * Impressive Ranking: #8 in love among 2.31M on 09/04/22 ©2021 ankitawrites_Xx CC: @YT_BookAwards_CoversLengkap
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My Short Story (2)
Finally aku beranjak ke short story ke dua yang berarti short story yang pertama udah tutup buku hehe. (sampul aku bikin by Canva)
❝ 𝐈𝐧 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐡... Hansi Flicks daughter Elysia Flick Has to fake date Lamine Yamal. ❞ ──────────── 𝐒𝐎𝐂𝐈𝐀𝐋 𝐌𝐄𝐃𝐈𝐀 & 𝐈𝐑𝐋 Lamine Yamal X fem oc X Pau Cubarsi
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