Mortisia -- preview.

Mortisia -- preview.

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I'd like to share with you the first chapter of a story I'm currently working on, to get some feedback and initial thoughts, to find out what's interesting, what's less interesting, what's perhaps confusing, etcetera. We join the young monarch Felikh Zavaya, Sarje of Mortisia, in his cabin at the tail-end of his Royal train. He is weary, deep in thought. But what troubles him? Where is he going? And what will become of the mighty nation of Mortisia in this chaotic period of uncertainty and mistrust?
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A young man with a mystery had been enrolled in a top school. After a life full of pain, and darkness held deeper down, he would have to come to terms with the monster he was. He had pushed through it all, but instead of leaving his demons behind, he only drowned himself with them in the end. Almost as if a water balloon was being filled, he let everything pile up. It was only a matter of time till he couldn't hold anymore, and popped. He would be tested, to see whether he would surpass his darkness and rise to rule with the others. Or left for dead, unable to control himself to the point of self-destruction. All he needed was a supporting hand, or so he thought, but when that hand came to him, he ended up rejecting it unwillingly. Pushing himself darker as his past consumes him once again. Can he finally break his own mold? Can he break the molds of others for the better? Could he possibly change the world around him once and for all? Or will history repeat itself as he drags down everyone with him once again... A lost mind in a powerful body, with a dark background, a short fuse, and a deep secret. With a heart of black and a brain of gold. As you read, you will learn about the world around him, what makes him so special, and will find out how he may have A Darkness Within... Warnings: - Vulgar language - Violence - Abuse - Sexual Themes (No Smut) - Personality Disorder (Disclaimer I dealt with a split personality and schizophrenia after traumatic events so some of this comes from experience) Note- I do NOT own UnOrdinary or any of its characters. All rights go to Uru-chan who writes and publishes the comic and webtoon. I only own a few added characters, and parts of the plot for this piece that does not mirror UnOrdinary.

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