Mentally Unstable
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Let's just say Lucy might actually be from hell.
NOTE-
I'm open to constructive criticism. I love feedback. I'm only 12 so I apologize if the details are not descriptive enough. Also this story will only be one chapter. Thank you.
Ps. This story is currently what I have to write in school and I hate it.
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