El Turnia: Becoming Fire *DISCONTINUED*
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THIS STORY HAS BEEN CANCELLED. IT WILL NOT BE FINISHED.
I as a fan myself assume that you, dear reader, have heard of the wonderful creation that is My Little Pony. And I also assume that you know of Equestria, the magical world where Twilight Sparkle and her friends keep peace and harmony. But now, please imagine and alternate world, quite like Equestria, but also completely different. Where there is blood and darkness and where creatures of your nightmares dwell to reek destruction on the innocent. This, my loyal pony loving friends, is El Turnia.
When Princess Gloria loses her parents in series of tragic events, she becomes queen of her home: El Turnia. She faces evil, deals with ruling a kingdom, and the fear that she could lose everything. This slightly overprotective and short tempered royal has a story you are about to hear.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: I began writing this story over a year ago when I was still developing my writing 'skills' so it gets better! Promise! Also I'm super bad at location names, but El Turnia is not supposed to be Spanish! I do not mean in any way to disrespect any culture, love y'all!
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