The Centurion

The Centurion

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The Centurion has travelled the ever stretching road for too long in search of a single exerpt from a long lost book. After finally catching wind of a scholar who is rumoured to know of the book he arrives at the to0wn of Teau to try and speak with this scholar, but finds that the town is even stranger than it had seemed at first. The Centurion is my Submission for Nanowrimo 2020, here you can find the first Draft version and let me know what you think so far - what works, what doesnt work and how you think i can improve CC very welcomed.
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