Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace Rewritten
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I don't hate George Lucas or the Star Wars prequels. I never have. Even when I first realized that these movies weren't as good as the originals back in high school. But it sure didn't stop others like myself to make some changes to make more sense from a cinematic standpoint. If this version does sound like the one we got, it's because I used it as a base. I also wrote this about a couple of years ago, but I decided to finally share it with the public.
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