What's Wrong, Sweetheart?

What's Wrong, Sweetheart?

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My mother barged into my room after multiple times of knocking and shouting for my name. “Lisa, baby. What’s wrong, sweetheart?” I did not move from my designated position on the floor, with my blade thrown far away from me. My skin was scratched slightly by the sharpness , before I stopped. I looked up at my sweet mother and whispered, “They told me to kill myself.” x 16-year-old Lisa Devano was an average high school girl attending an average high school with a bunch of girl friends. But what wasn’t so average about her is that she started having hiccups in her life. Seeing “doppelgangers” and hearing things from “people” in her life that she wishes not to hear? And what’s worse for her mother to ask her the same question, “What’s wrong, sweetheart?” and given the same reply everytime about suicide. Life’s not the same anymore for Lisa and the people she loves.
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She didn't mean for this to happen. Maybe it was the venomous thoughts that infiltrated her brain at that exact moment. Or maybe her sub-conscious self was preparing for this day forever. Whatever the reason may have been, it is now that she has to confront the underlying emotions she had pushed away for so long in ways she never thought she could. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is a teen fiction novel and something I've never done before, but I hope you all enjoy! (In progress.)

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