Cold Breath

This is about a girl who has lost all hope for humanity, and lost all her humanity. This is about Velvet Fernandez. A small change made her life do a total 360° spin. She may seem unbreakable but is anyone really? It's part romance, horror, and maybe it'll be a little paranormal. You'll have to read to find out! Please don't hate on this, I wouldn't mind tips though, if you don't like it you can just not read it. Thanks, Love!