Mafia's Raven

This is my first time writing a book so go easy on me.
I'm just testing the first chapter or two to see if anyone reads. I'll write more chapters if people actually like it
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Everything is gone. It wasn't just a house, it was where I took my first steps, said my first word, my first home, but most importantly where my mom was. Shes gone, my life is in flames and all I can do is watch. Watch everything I ever loved burning before my eyes. Numb, all I feel is numb not angry, not sadness, not hate, just numb.
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P.S. I can't spell worth shit so sorry in advance and please be nice about Corrections