Detective, Detective
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Last published Sat, Oct 11, 2014
Ok guys... So i thought of an idea for a story in literacy class in school (we had to give a description of what our dream book would be, and this story is what i thought of). Chapter one is a description of the story. Tell me if you want me to continue please.
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