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Pained

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Parts 13
Time 42m

But when I was handed the knife, I felt something inside of me change. Something awakening, a terrifying power that I kept locked up inside me. 

Strength. 

I was blinded by it, the sudden rush that coursed through me. Succumbing to instinct, I slice through my hand. Accepting the pain, as I watched blood meet lit coals. And with every drop, strength's grip tightened around me. 

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A Divergent Fanfic. It's more of a prequel fanfic, so it does not contain Tris. Sorry.

Discover the root of Eric and Four's animosity. A touching love story about letting go of fear and self acceptance. Meet the hidden person in their past that shaped their future. A story about fighting all that makes you weak and finding the strength within. 

Meet... The girl before Tris.All Rights Reserved

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Holding Back by 1D_divergent

COMPLETED From the moment Zeke and Uriah Pedrad came home with him, she hated him. There wasn't a problem because he hated her too. Everyone was used to their fighting and bickering so it almost didn't matter. Tris Prior and Tobias Eaton. Always have and always will be enemies. Or so they thought... Maybe this whole time they've just been holding back. All characters belong to Veronica Roth

You And Me Against The World | ✅ by Cloakseeker

#42 in Divergent (08/15/2018) #7 in Tris Prior (08/15/2018) #8 in Tobias Eston (08/15/2018) Disclaimer: I do not own the Divergent Series. FourTris prevent the war on abnegation, but before Jeanine goes down she reveals that Tris is divergent. How will the people react? What will happen next? This story is over 400K words long and there are several tie-ins connected to the main story. I will let you know along the way. Also, the drabble series "Moments We Share" and the one-shot "Shotgun" are glimpses into the future. To be read after this story and it'll make more sense. However, the drabbles were written at the same time as the main story and sometimes, chronologically speaking, things turned out a little different in YAMATW. I started posting this story over a year ago on FanFiction.Net, where I use the same username as here. I will try to update as often as I can, but I wanted to edit the story a little. If you can't wait for updates look for it there or using my blog in the profile description. You can comment here of course or there, but keep in mind I can't reply to guests on fanfiction.net. Pinterest board dedicated to this story: https://ro.pinterest.com/ChristiWind/you-and-me-against-the-world-divergent-fanfiction/ Rating: M Genre: fanfiction, romance, hurt/comfort, humor, supernatural Started: January 13th 2015 Ended: May 31st 2016

Initiate [ERIC/JAI] by erinrheataylor

My name's Cassia Hollester. I'm different from the usual suspects, I'm divergent. Although, I never knew what that actually meant. I'm willing to find out. I'd never experienced love before, not even in my own family- until I met Eric. The leader that everyone was scared of, including myself. ******* *This story is set a year before divergent, hence why Tris or any of that books characters are included in Dauntless. The only characters included are those who would've already been there the year before Tris' transfer.* BOTH STORIES ARE CURRENTLY UNDER CONSTRUCTION SO READING IS NOT ADVISED AT THIS POINT! THANKS FOR UNDERSTANDING!!

A New "Life" [COMPLETED] ✔️ by TheWalkingHeda

Second book is now up on Wattpad! "One Choice." [DISCONTINUED] - Sorry || In the last book of The Divergent Series, Allegiant, Tris doesn't die. She kills David before he can kill her and releases the serum. Soon after, she moves into the city with Tobias and some of the other refugees. They find out that they will be expecting but the plan for a family is cut short when they are kidnapped, brought to The Milwaukee Experiment, and are wiped of their memories. Tris' memory is spared due to her divergence but no one knows. She will have to escape the city with the ones she loves in order to create a lasting future for her and her child. With some bumps in the way... {DISCLAIMER} This is a fanfic and it is based off of the book and movie series The Divergent Series which is written by Veronica Roth. This fanfic starts after the last book of the series Allegiant. I created a few characters but most of the characters in this fan fiction I do not own. All rights go to Veronica Roth for her amazing series. - This is the very first story I've ever written on WattPad so it's very very poorly written and definitely not how I write now. I've decided to keep it up to let all of you readers give it a chance even though I would basically change the whole story if I was to re write it.

Revolution -Eric Coulter- by xoscreamxo

Riley Eaton was the daughter of Abnegation leader Marcus Eaton. Her father is a terrible man to both her and her brother Tobias. His ways worsen when Tobias leaves Abnegation, but Riley understands why he left. She would have left too. He told her on her choosing day to follow him. When that day comes, Riley is faced with the hardest decision of her life. Once in Dauntless, she meets her brother and finds close friendships with Tris and Christina. Everything is going fine until she meets Eric Coulter. The ruthless Dauntless leader, but Riley sees something different in him, something good. Divergent (Movie) Insurgent (Movie) Allegiant (Movie x book) I do not own the Divergent series, all credit to the directors and writers.

My Fear (Eric Divergent Fanfic) by dauntlessborncandor

COMPLETED Elena is Candor born but when she turns sixteen and chooses her faction--despite her test results she chooses Dauntless. Upon arriving to Dauntless she meets leader, Eric who is mysterious and persuasive. A one night stand leaves her faced with a decision that will effect the rest of her life. Eric doesn't love anyone but himself, but is now faced with a situation that will require him to grow as a person and change. But is he capable? Follow Elena and Eric's story from start to finish. I OWN NONE OF THE CHARACTERS EXCEPT ELENA AND I DO NOT OWN THE CONCEPT OF DIVERGENT; rights to that go to Veronica Roth. I am just writing a fanfic. ***Mature Material

His Girl - Tobias Eaton by malia_tvdu

Alexis June Frey. Alexis had a rough life growing up in Amity but it made her stronger and fight even harder for her freedom away from her dad. Choosing day she chose Dauntless and met... Tobias 'Four' Eaton. Four also had a rough life growing up but once he laid eyes on Alexis as a new initiate to Dauntless, he knew he could never leave her behind. He also had a big sharing problem with Alexis and knew he'd never be able to let someone else have her. Divergent ✅ Insurgent (working on rn) Tobias Eaton x Alexis Frey (OC)

Divergent: Unleashed | ✓ by 4getmenever

We've all been wondering what's outside the fence, and this is what I think could happen. Join characters like Tris, Tobias, Uriah, and Zeke as they step out of their world and into our own and face things that they'd never faced before. Tris and Tobias, forced apart. The dead, still alive. A girl related to Tobias that is more like Tris than anyone else. And...a break up?! Will the characters be able to handle our world? Or will everything they've worked for have been for nothing?

Killing Me Slowly by -Melle

"Bless me with your sweet words, I undeservingly cherish." ~ I am my own undoing. I am my own worst nightmare. Glare and sneer all you wish, I've seen many others do much worse. They told me to look in the mirror, see myself as the world sees me. I saw a monster, he saw a broken girl. But that's the thing about broken things, it takes not only time, but patience, effort and hope to mend them. The broken can't be mended if they don't want to be. But that's the thing you see, the numbness I felt to the world was comforting, I couldn't be hurt anymore. I didn't want to mend. I thought my heart had dealt all it could, that anymore emotions would kill me. But that numbness, that empty void that had no fear, joy, love or hatred, it was killing me, slowly. A/N Sequel to 'Call Me Six'. WARNING: I do not edit my chapters because I have no time; they are written and posted in the brief intervals of my chaotic life. Expect grammar and spelling errors. This story revolves around the complications of teenage love, sex and slut shaming. This is not supposed to be taken offensively - quite the opposite actually.

Right? --A Fourtris/Tris Pedrad Story by olympus-writes

Forget Beatrice Prior. Here comes Tris Pedrad. She has a twin named Uriah and an older brother, Zeke. He is two years older. She has been a prodigy since age six along with Uriah. He has eight fears and she has six. What will happen when a stiff transfers to dauntless? Will Fourtris still happen? 🎖Highest Ranks: - 1st in Fourtris (multiple times) - 1st in Divergent - 1st in Insurgent - 1st in Abnegation - 1st in Four

Snow Crush by theoceps

Tris... She has a passion for snowboarding and her family owns a ski lodge. She has a group of friends that all look out for each other, and everyone has known one another for years. Then one day, Four moves into town with Marcus. Four and Tris are likely to crash into each other. Quite literally, too. Four... The handsome new guy. He's been abused by Marcus for as long as he can remember. His mother left him at a young age when she passed away. Just like that...he had no one. He develops extensive, strong feelings towards Tris. Which starts to grow more and more while he is staying at the ski lodge. Even after he leaves it progresses. This isn't just some ordinary crush though, it's a snow crush. A snow crush on a gorgeous, talented girl. The duo is inseparable, best friends even. But, will he finally admits his feelings towards her? Or will someone come between them? -AU Divergent fanfic- {Beautiful cover by @hamiltonss} I don't own Divergent or any song, book, movie, or show mentioned in this fanfic.

One stolen night ✔ (Divergent Fourtris Fanfiction) by springberrynights

This is the story of Tris and Tobias first night together in the Insurgent movie, about what might have happened between them after the camera faded to black too quickly... There are two chapters with different POVs. *Completed* This was the first fanfiction I ever wrote and I'm happy if you like it and vote/share/comment on it. ❤ Enjoy reading! Warning: Rated M/MA! DISCLAIMER: I don't own the characters, they belong to Veronica Roth. Beginning and part of the dialogue are from the Insurgent movie by summit.

Divergent- Four's Pov by agreatperhapse

Have you ever wondered what Divergent would be like if told by the character of Tobias Eaton? What would be his views of the Dauntless initiation? What would he think about Tris, about society? This story is the first novel of the Divergent series written by Veronica Roth, only in Four's Point of View. I am currently revising this story since it was written more than a year-and-a-half ago and has a lot of mistakes. If a chapter has a * next to it's tidal then it has already been edited and reviewed. ALL CHARACTERS BELONG TO THE AMAZING VERONICA ROTH. I DIDN'T MAKE ANY CHARCATERS UP MYSELF

The Heart's Melody | ✅ by Cloakseeker

Disclaimer: I do not own the Divergent Series. Modern day AU. Tris and her friends start a band, Divergent, but don't tell any of their family members. They keep it secret to prove that they can be successful on their own. the story follows mainly Tris through her adolescence and into adulthood. Ups and downs along her way will shape her and transform her into a strong woman. Rating: T Genre: romance, hurt/comfort, family, friendship The ring that inspired the Eaton heirloom in chapter 22 - https://ro.pinterest.com/pin/543035667549560551/

Divergent Academy by TeamLeo_divergent

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From abnegation to dauntless (FATD) || ✓ Completed by ratk1d

A Divergent fanficion In this fanfiction, Tris and Tobias meet in Abnegation. The basic plot of Divergent, Tris transferring to Dauntless and her and Four falling in love are still happening, but in different order and with my own twist to it. Like many fanfics, the war doesn't happen in this, but many twists, dangers and people from the past try to stop Fourtris's happiness. I hope you deside to read this, if you do, thank you <4 I'm currently editing this story, so it will become less cringy with every edited chapter. This story moves quite fast, in the beginning, but it worked for me when I started this story. I do NOT own Divergent, The great 5(Veronica Roth) does. I do own the plot, and some of the characters I add. But otherwise, I don't own the songs, or most of the characters, but some of the pictures I do own, I will tell if I do. Please don't copy my ideas, if you do, ask and give credit.

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To Try Again | Divergent (DISCONTINUED) by breannefaith

ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! After Tris's death, Tobias goes to see her in the weapons lab. When he gets there, he realizes that he went only to be greeted with the same fate. What happens when they get a second chance at life? Will they take it? Will they be able to save the ones they love? Read to find out. One choice gives you a second chance. One choice kills you for good. One choice changes everything. I am not good at summaries. Hopefully the story is better! This is my first story! FourTris! ❤️ Edit (01/23/19): It's been over a year since I began this fanfiction. My writing has improved greatly, and you guys always make my day. Thanks guys. 💞 Edit (4/14/20): ew. PLEASE DONT READ THIS. THE WRITING IS TERRIBLE. I WAS THIRTEEN, AND THIS IS NO LONGER BEING UPDATED. TY

A Wildfire Kind of Love (Divergent Fanfiction) - [Discontinued] by wait-thats-illegal

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Holding Back

COMPLETED From the moment Zeke and Uriah Pedrad came home with him, she hated him. There wasn't a problem because he hated her too. Everyone was used to their fighting and bickering so it almost didn't matter. Tris Prior and Tobias Eaton. Always have and always will be enemies. Or so they thought... Maybe this whole time they've just been holding back. All characters belong to Veronica Roth