The Beast in The Winter Woods

This is a short story I wrote back in my highschool years and I was really worried that it would suck but I'm finally saying "TO HELL WITH IT I'M GONNA POST IT!" and so I was wondering from you guys if I should actually write a full story for it or not? The title is also a work in progress if y'all like it it going to change to what I have in my draft docs.

Anyways leave comments on what you guys think.
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