Eternal >> l.p
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Last published Sun, Oct 12, 2014
Have you ever wanted to float?
To have nothing holding you down?
To feel the wind in your hair and your soul being lifted on the highest pedestal.
Well i don't, why?
Because. Ive simply floated so high that nothing, not even the love of those i cared for can reach me. I've reached a lonely and dark pedestal that i can't really come down from. well thats until she came.
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