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Forbidden Love || Anakin x Reader

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Y/n Amidala was only known as Padme's little sister until she met Anakin Skywalker. Her whole life was changed upside as she found herself in love with Jedi. This isn't a regular love story, no. Y/n Amidala had so much power in the force; she became one herself. Their love was forbidden amongst the Jedi Order. Throughout the story, both lovers go through the most challenging levels of their love. Defeated by the dark side one will go through, but who? 

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"Have faith my love." Anakin says. he placed his hand on my cheek and caressed it. Panic filled the city, in the far distance was the temple burning into flames. I sensed fear and hatred in him. I trusted him. I knew him. I know what his intentions are.. or so I thought.





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a force bond | anidala au by candy-necklaces

Luke and Leia were about to turn four years old, and Padmé was desperate to have Anakin back. She was desperate to turn the sad & lonely Darth Vader into the man she once knew as Anakin Skywalker. She wasn't giving up. Padmé was lucky enough to even be alive, Bail Organa and Obi-Wan stored her in frozen carbonite to rejuvenate her health, she only just got out of it recently. highest ranks: #3 in #padme #5 in #leiaskywalker #19 in #anidala disclaimer; -this was made before that last season of tcw came out, and along with the bad batch, and the mandalorian season. ahsoka's timeline might be iffy. -i personally have not made any characters in this story, they all belong to george lucas, and if i do make one, i'd tell you. -this is an au so some things may be incorrect, but it's alright. ITS AN AU!! -vader's suit is simply just armour, not a life support.. since in this story he did not burn back on mustafar. -padmé is indeed a force sensitive in this story, that's how they have this connection. she may have less than anakin and obi-wan but she still obtains the power. -spelling may be a problem but it'll be checked once it's officially done

A Long Time Ago, In a Galaxy Far Away by Amithisia

Anakin and Obi-Wan have just rescued the Chancellor and returned to planet side safe and sound. Anakin has finally had his long awaited reunion with Padmé. But it doesn't last for long. The next thing the three of them know, the Force has transported them to a different place. A different universe, to a planet that is known as Earth. Luna Snow Ramsey is nearly fourteen. She is obsessed with Star Wars, friendless, has a past she tries not to think about, and is used to handling everything one way: solo. One night, her world is turned upside down when she meets three people from a place that she had previously thought only existed in her imagination and dreams. Things begin to become steadily more chaotic as time goes on. Luna believes the Force will bring the three back to their proper universe, but until then it is up to her to find a way to keep Anakin from the darkside and warn the two Jedi and Senator of what is to come. It doesn't help that she knows so much about their world and has to be careful of what she tells of their future. From there, things that Luna would normally handle alone are unwilling for her to be able to take care of, and another memory is added to the ever growing pile stitched behind a wall for past memories she doesn't want to think about. Then the Force get's involved. Besbin anyone? I do not own Star Wars, I only own the characters I have created. I am finished with this book, but I am dyslexic, so there may be spelling or wording errors. Please feel free to point them out. Highest Rankings: #1 in anakinandpadme 07/12/18 #4 in anidala 09/17/18 #1 in obiwankenobi 11/21/18; 02/17/22 #1 in anakinskywalker 03/25,/22 #1 in anakin 08/2/20; 09/15/20; 04/15/22 #1 in darthvader 12/12/23 #1 in leia 03/03/21; 01/14/22 #3 in earth 07/11/21 #1 in leiaorgana 08/10/21 #1 in padme 02/02/22; 01/30/23 #1 in lukeskywalker 04/20/22; 03/16/23 #1 in jedi 06/5/22 #1 in palpatine 10/10/22 #4 in starwars 3/20/23 #4 in force on May the 4th 2024

devotion || anakin skywalker [completed] by guccifelixx

"Anakin, w-we can't." I explained while diverting my eyes from his gaze. He forced me to look at him again, guiding my chin even closer to his than it was before. "Yes we can." Was all he said as he closed the gap between us and connected his lips to mine. • • • When the attempts on Senator Verena Leoet's life prove to be increasing in danger, she is forced to employ newly appointed Jedi Master Anakin Skywalker as her protector, and as they grow closer; feelings are realized, emotions are kindled, and morals are questioned all in the name of devotion. _________________ Disclaimer: This fanfiction isn't your normal Anakin Skywalker love story, I've included things from the EU to make this more believable and less fangirl-ish. Yes this is a romance and yes it does move fast, just don't expect Verena to magically find out she's force-sensitive in her early twenties and then get trained by Jedi masters:)))

Eternal ~ Anakin Skywalker ~ by TheNightwisher

e·ter·nal /əˈtərn(ə)l/ adjective~ Lasting or existing forever; without end or beginning. (of truths, values, or questions) valid for all time; essentially unchanging. "eternal truths of art and life" ｡ ☆✼★━━━━━━━━━━★✼☆｡ They said the Force had always been here. It had no beginning and no end. It was life and death, and it surrounded us... it was in us; it was always in motion and never stopped. It would always be... Eternal. Those who could wield it were Jedi or Sith, guardians of light, or conquerors of the dark side of the force. Good and Evil. I never thought I could behold such a gift, not till my home planet, Naboo, was taken over by the Trade federation while my older sister, Padmé, was Queen. Two Jedi told me what I could be, how to become a hero of legends, a guardian of peace and justice- a Jedi Knight. I was to train under Mace Windu, a strict and uncompromising Jedi master- but a powerful one. He taught me everything, like how there was only good and evil. Jedi and Sith- I never questioned it, of course. Not till certain Jedi proved otherwise. Anakin Skywalker, the best pilot in the galaxy and the greatest Jedi I'd ever known. But there was more, much more. He was arrogant, headstrong, always biting off more than he could chew. He was strong, brave, and at times unbelievably kind. He made me laugh, and we taught each other how to love. But Anakin was also a man who wanted too much, who cared too much. It lead him astray, away from me, from good into evil. But was it just for evil? The thing always questioned, to this day. Could the universe indeed be as black and white as I painted? No, not anymore. Not from what I had seen and experienced. How could I still love a man who'd fallen so far? If the world was just good and evil- I should hate him- but it was not that simple. It never was. Because my love for Anakin Skywalker will always be... Eternal

Padmé Amidala - her perspective by pingis03

"After a while I was able to get ahold of my breath enough to stop the trembling and sit up. I slowly lifted my hand and placed it on my belly, instinctively checking my baby in the most primitive way. As the anxiety subsided I was able to focus on the other thing inside of me, the more permanent one - my little one. I still carried it with me and therefore I still had something to fight for. My family. Anakin. I curled up underneath the duvet and tried to escape the crushing feeling of deprived of my sole function and calling by directing my thoughts to what was still real, what was still important. But I still couldn't shake the feeling of letting the entire galaxy down." ----------- The events of Revenge of The Sith told from Padmé's perspective. Combining the original storyline with deleted scenes and a few non-canon bits (they do not alter the canon version, simply add to it). I do not claim to be an expert of Padmé as a character. I have written a Revenge of the Sith from Anakin's perspective, feel free to check that out! Feedback is more than welcome :)

Reunited♛[Star Wars] {Book 1} {Completed} by MinJiminnies

The way he looked at her was like he was peering into her soul. He tried to get a sense for who this girl was. He tiled his head to the side soon beginning to give her a small smile. "Young Skywalker's sister you are, hm?" The creature asked still smiling up at her giving off a feeling of relaxation. "Yes." "Your own name do you have?" "Of course...Amara Skywalker." She spoke nervously seeing Master Windu look down towards his green friend, looks being exchanged back and forth. ||Episode Ⅱ|| * * * * * As much as I would love to own Star Wars I sadly don't all rights go to Disney/Lucasfilms including: Some of the characters, lines and plots. I only own Amara, Most of her lines and her basic plot.

The Green Bead {Branching Out - Book III} by kurenohikari

Since Qui-Gon's death, Anakin had become the anchor in Obi-Wan's life. It was Anakin who gave him purpose. There was no greater pride than seeing him surpass the other Padawans, watching him grow into the prodigy everyone had expected him to be. Obi-Wan had even allowed himself a rare indulgence-gloating about his apprentice's achievements, silently basking in the knowledge that he had helped shape the Jedi who would one day be the Order's greatest. But with that pride came an overwhelming guilt. Obi-Wan had never been able to reconcile it fully, but his attachment to Anakin-his love for him-was plain as day to anyone who knew them. The way he lit up when Anakin was in the room, the way he defended his Padawan even when the Council was less than forgiving. That connection had deepened over time, morphing from the playful, nurturing affection of a master for his apprentice into something more guarded. He had become stricter with Anakin as the years passed, holding back the casual warmth he once offered so easily, because he knew that his love for Anakin was becoming too personal, too dangerous. Attachments led to fear, and fear led... well, Obi-Wan knew where that path led. He couldn't afford to let his feelings slip into attachment, even though everyone in the Temple could see it. The truth was, Anakin was his favorite. He had always been. And that scared Obi-Wan more than any battle, more than any Sith Lord. But did Anakin know that? Did Anakin realize how much he meant to Obi-Wan? Or had he misinterpreted Obi-Wan's stricter behavior as a lack of affection? The thought gnawed at Obi-Wan. He remembered sitting by Anakin's bedside, wondering if he had ever told Anakin how proud he was, how much he truly cared for him. But when Anakin had finally woken from that coma, everything had changed.

Bittersweet Devotion [Star Wars x Anakin Skywalker] by kindred-souls

What if it was not a senator who Anakin Skywalker loved, but one of his own: a Jedi? And what if that Jedi chose to side with evil rather than lose him forever? [This is a completely new take on Anakin's story. It begins in Attack of the Clones and concludes in Return of the Jedi. The timeline is similar to the original with major changes based on the insertion of my original character. and fyi - anakin keeps all of his limbs] 2017 - Star Wars Fanfic Award Winner! Top Rankings: - #35 in Science Fiction - #1 in starwars - #1 in anakinskywalker **BOOK IS COMPLETE BUT I AM CURRENTLY EDITING/REPUBLISHING THE WHOLE THING **UPDATES RELEASED EVERY THURSDAY & SATURDAY**

7 days by pingis03

"A moment passed as the Dark side, always present but always in a slumber, awakened inside of me and every question was answered. Where the abyss had been mere moments ago, steady ground now revealed itself, erasing every particle of the paralysing fear. And on the ground a path now lay, waiting for me to thread. There was no guilt, no shame, no limits. Because this was my lot in life, this was the moment everything I had ever done had been leading me to. Avenging my mom, eliminating Dooku, being with Padmé. I had mistakenly carried the burden of shame for my actions and now, seeing clearly for the first time, I could finally see that what I had done was right. Never again would I suffer from guilt that was falsely placed on my shoulders, never again would I act in vain. When I drew another breath I could feel the path unfold in front of me, inside of me, and it was clear, certain. Power surged through my veins, unrestrained at last, spurred on by the hint of darkness slowly rising." -------------------- The events of Revenge of The Sith told from Anakin's perspective. Combining the original storyline with deleted scenes and a few non-canon bits (they do not alter the canon version, simply add to it). I do not claim to be an expert of Anakin as a character. I have written a Revenge of the Sith from Padmé's perspective, feel free to check that out! Feedback is more than welcome :)

𝐙𝐈𝐆𝐆𝐘 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐑𝐃𝐔𝐒𝐓: 𝐀. 𝐒𝐊𝐘𝐖𝐀𝐋𝐊𝐄𝐑 [𝟏] by jackslandry

"my father believed we were the force bound soulmates." "i believe we are." 🌌 jedi master, apolla jinn is sent on a mission with anakin skywalker, her forcebound soulmate to protect the senator of naboo, padmé amidala. apolla didn't expect to fall in love with or have a romantic relationship with anakin. the two jedi keep it a secret but only padmé and apolla's half-brother, helios are aware. the jedi are up against the sith, count dooku. will the jedi make it out alive? 🌌 anakin skywalker/darth vader x oc slow burn-ish star wars: attack of the clones-star wars: revenge of the sith cover by @marvelgirl_10

Betrayal♕[Star Wars] {Book 2}{Completed} by MinJiminnies

"If you're not with me, then you're my enemy." "So if she does not stand with you, would you try to kill her?" Obi-Wan pointed to me. I looked up at him before then turning to Anakin now seeing them both stare at me. "She will always stand with me." Anakin said with confidence. I only connected my eyes with him for a second before I broke contact looking down unable to admit the truth. But even I didn't know what I would do. ||Episode III|| * * * * * I would love to to own Star Wars, but sadly I don't. All rights go to Disney/Lucasfilms including: Some Characters, lines, and plots. I only own Amara and some other characters, most of her lines, and her basic plot.

The Countess ━ OBI-WAN KENOBI by msdoraliliana

LEILANI SERENNO bridged the past and the present, born into a family of cruelty and then groomed to fulfil a role in the grand scheme of things. She was a puppet manipulated by her brother, ensnared in a larger narrative orchestrated by the Force. Yet, a crucial error changed everything-what was meant to render her compliant instead transformed her into a leader, one feared enough not to be feasted upon. She became the will of the Force. While OBI-WAN KENOBI only ever focused on the future, constantly fearing the moment he'd have to let everything go. His mind was a storm of thoughts, neurons racing through the shadows of his memories, as he navigated the world. An impeccable pilot, who didn't like to fly; a devastating warrior who rather did not fight. A negotiator without a peer who preferred to sit alone in a cave and meditate. TOGETHER, they were everything. Past, present and future, the most important pieces of the game. Complementary; two parts of a whole. --- cover by the amazing @Abeth98 <3 ©️ 2024 1st on #countdooku; 04/25/2024 ♡

Celestial Bonds - ANAKIN SKYWALKER - WTM by HeadintheClouds_001

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The Jedi Code by ansleybug18

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Luke and Leia were about to turn four years old, and Padmé was desperate to have Anakin back. She was desperate to turn the sad & lonely Darth Vader into the man she once knew as Anakin Skywalker. She wasn't giving up. Padmé was lucky enough to even be alive, Bail Organa and Obi-Wan stored her in frozen carbonite to rejuvenate her health, she only just got out of it recently. highest ranks: #3 in #padme #5 in #leiaskywalker #19 in #anidala disclaimer; -this was made before that last season of tcw came out, and along with the bad batch, and the mandalorian season. ahsoka's timeline might be iffy. -i personally have not made any characters in this story, they all belong to george lucas, and if i do make one, i'd tell you. -this is an au so some things may be incorrect, but it's alright. ITS AN AU!! -vader's suit is simply just armour, not a life support.. since in this story he did not burn back on mustafar. -padmé is indeed a force sensitive in this story, that's how they have this connection. she may have less than anakin and obi-wan but she still obtains the power. -spelling may be a problem but it'll be checked once it's officially done