COMMANDER ONLINE
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VRFDMMORPG, Virtual Reality Full Dive Massively Multiplayer Online Game, COMMANDER ONLINE, Is the game that break all the record of MMORPG with it massive world map, the number of item and NPC, Quest and the freedom that all the players can enjoy is the pinnacle of what so call open world and sandbox game. The world of COMMANDER ONLINE is a classic fantasy medieval era theme, with great touch of magic, conflict between nation and races, with the world and it inhabitant driven by the player action.
Aolion Continent is the massive world of COMMANDER ONLINE, with many races and kingdom scattered in it. In Aolion Continent, every race have their own kingdom and territory, Elf with their forest, Lizardmen in their desert, Dragonkin in their high mountain, Dwarf in their great cave and human... human is just everywhere and monster roam the land and air freely. In this world, the strong will survive, kingdoms war each other in the name of many reason, glory, race, religion, hatred, and justice as they say. War in Aolion go on for hundreds of years, causing suffering and dead for many of inhabitants but also bring culture, technology and economic development for others.
Follow the story of Aramaki Arla living in the dream of many otakus, holder of the title "God of War" in the most competitive and brutal game of Commander Online, he that being alone able stand in Global Leaderboard with his trusted NPC companion, to find the place where his talent can be useful, to find enemies, friends, love that he never taste before and to lead his mercenary group in the battle as he venture is a vast world of Aolion Continent.
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And.. This writing is to train my English skills, so if there a way to improve the story, the way I describe something or else, feel free to leave a comment.
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