The Trials of Perfection
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Ongoing, First published Nov 15, 2020
For fans of the Hunger Games, Divergent Series, Ender's Game, Gender Games, and any other dystopian novels, come dive into the futuristic world of the United States, only this future is distorted and broken, what used to be one has become three. The United States is now three separate countries, Hilis, Pratius, and of course the main country of this story, Madollis.

 This story follows the country of Madollis which has cut itself off from the rest of the globe in the hopes of creating the perfect human race. Within Madollis are three main cities where different Utopian experiments are underway; Miré, Skada, and Pēja. Each city is striving to perfect a different aspect of humanity, but to do so they must rid of the people who are deemed unfit and imperfect. But sometimes someone happens to slip past their radar and can live their life with their secret; their secret that they are imperfect.

And that is where Raiva White comes in. She is a resident of Miré and she has a secret that she must keep at all costs, else her life could be in serious danger. Her secret has left a scar on her life causing her to always live in fear. But one day, her secret may just come to light. After all, secrets aren't secrets forever. Raiva must overcome the definition of perfection and be the person she has always been and not try to assimilate with society. With embracing one's true self comes many unexpected and expected challenges. Are you ready to see just how far Raiva is willing to go? 

Remember, every utopia is just a dystopia in hiding.
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