Sightless Dancing
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Last published Sun, May 24, 2015
Violette Manilacai is a seventeen year old girl, almost eighteen, that lived in a basic busy city. She loved to dance, ballet, hip hop, jazz, she loved it all. Though her life sounds like no worry, she was diagnosed with Retinitis Pigmentosa, a condition that slowly turns people blind as they age. During her teen years, she has been experiencing hard symptoms that she never had before, very harsh blurs near light, not being able to make out words in books and papers, and seeing peoples' faces and not being able to recognize them. She knew she was going blind sooner or later. If she turns blind, what would happen? Would she still be able to go to school? Better yet, would she still be able to dance and live her dream of dancing in front of a real crowd? She worried about this all her life, and it was coming soon, very, very soon...
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Also note that this is NOT EDITED, and when rough draft is done, it will be marked as (EDITING). This means there will be currently a lot, and I mean like A LOT of misspelled words and many grammar mistakes! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED
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