Uncontrolable End
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Last published Fri, Oct 26, 2012
A hatswitch: writing a poem to portray another person. At the time, a close friend was losing someone close to them from cancer. I took her feelings and emotions and made something beautiful for her, preformed infront of my entire high school when I was younger. I hope you'll enjoy it. I still do.
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