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TheNoobieWriter
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  • Reads 27
  • Votes 10
  • Parts 5
  • Time 17m
TheNoobieWriter
Ongoing, First published Dec 05, 2020
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Hello, this is the first time I am writing a story so I hope you all really like it. "This is the story about a son who is seeking justice for her mother but it turns out the truth is not what he has hoped for".

Please give me an unfiltered opinion on the story so that I can improve my writing skills
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