Story cover for What Use To Be and What  It Is Now by raven199
What Use To Be and What It Is Now
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  • Reads 48
  • Votes 2
  • Parts 9
  • Time 10m
Ongoing, First published Oct 18, 2014
So this is my first story that I have let people read and I would love to hear feedback from you all it will be much appreciated by myself and I can make it more interesting for you guys so please comment on it.

This is about a boy how wants to protects his friends but one day he gets turned into a vamp. He tries to live his normal life but  he evanchaly had to tell his friends. And than the other vamps get invaded. Will he ever have what remands of a normal life.
This is my first story so comment please.
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