What Use To Be and What It Is Now

So this is my first story that I have let people read and I would love to hear feedback from you all it will be much appreciated by myself and I can make it more interesting for you guys so please comment on it.

This is about a boy how wants to protects his friends but one day he gets turned into a vamp. He tries to live his normal life but he evanchaly had to tell his friends. And than the other vamps get invaded. Will he ever have what remands of a normal life.
This is my first story so comment please.