Evon
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Ongoing, First published Dec 13, 2020
Once again, Evon has moved to a new town, a new system, and she is tired of it. Everything is the same, rinse and repeat, except for the robot like girl with a blank stare who sits in front of her in this unknown school.

Update 1: Fixed all tenses to past, varied adjectives

Attempting to write the novel version of a webtoon I dream to make in the future : D

This is a nowhere near finished story (I do have the main plot down however) I am posting this here for opinions mainly, as this isn't even a whole chapter long yet. 

Quick overrun: This story begins in first person perspective of the character Evon, and yes, she is supposed to come off as rude. I do not want a main character you can sympathize for easily, as it'll carry on the story in the future.
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