A Wild West Tale

This story is a bit different. I'm writing a brand new one... set in the Wild West, as shown by the title. I'm gonna add in original characters, as well as a few that were really in history, but also I'm adding in someone really special. I'm making the main character an interpretation of my grandfather. I've thought about doing this for a while but never got around to it. See, my grandfather used to always dress up as a cowboy and pretend to shoot my grandmother with his fake revolver. He passed in 2016 and was someone really important to me, so I thought I'd try to make him immortal by putting him in this story.

Not everything in this story will be real, such as events and places

Please do give me some feedback, I'd really appreciate what you think I could do better.