The Critique Shop
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Last published Wed, Dec 30, 2020
Hello aspiring writers! Want your stories to be reviewed for FREE? Then my critique shop is perfect for you. It's free because I really love reading books and it's up to you if you want to follow my account. I'll be happy to help you with your writing journey. :)
I only accept 10 books per week. Tagalog, Taglish or English with a minimum of 3 chapters and maximum of 5 chapters in these genres: Romance, New Adult, Teen fiction, Short story, Adventure, Comedy.
Perks: If I like your book there's a chance that I will put it on my reading list "On-going gems" and even promote it, again for free.
Note: The purpose of this critique shop is to give a "READER-RESPONSE CRITICISM" which focuses more on the substance of the story rather than technicalities.
WARNING!! I will give honest feedback on some points which I feel may need improvement. No sugar coating.
That's all. Check the rules and other important details inside if you want to give it a try. :)
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