Forgiveness (Read Description)

Im nowhere near a professional writer so advice and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated, but i do enjoy writing and put alotta thought, love and effort into this story so I hope you like it!

Plot:
XGaster realised the damage she'd done and decides to make it right by gaining Forgiveness.

Its not easy though, everyone's upset and everyones angry at her for what she did. And a strange, unfriendly presence is lurking around... But what is

Characters:
XMumster

Fanfictions main character and the fanfics XGaster. Shes also a female.

Shes a very timid, paranoid woman who tries her best to be better. X is also kinda schizophrenic and sees hallucinations and is very delusional and skittish.

Outfit - Dark purple coat (same as IX), Grey turtleneck jumper, Dark purple T-shirt over the top with a white X going across the torso, Dark purple boots and undergarments with the signature glasses (cant see without them).

XMettaton

Antagonist-but-not of the story.

Hes very aggressive but can be kind. Quick tempered and vengeful.

XPapyrus

Important side character.
Hes kind, what's new? He helps XMum and believes in her. Saves her from trouble and stops XMTT from getting out of hand.