Review of "Her Returned Mate"
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Recently the editor of "Her Returned Mate" asked me if I could give a review of the book. So...um...here I am.
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Read with 'They Call Me Foxy' ____________________________________________________________ I never thought I would have a mate, seeing that I had given up my chance over a century ago for power. I never thought that I would have a person to lean on. I would never get to become a mother, even though I wanted to become one. I never thought that I would find love. And, I never thought I would find love in an unexpected place. But, one quest, one pack, and one Alpha later, I found my mate. What I didn't expect was to be mated to my dead sister's mate. _______________________________________ NOTE: IF YOU READ THIS BOOK ON ANY OTHER APP BESIDES WATTPAD THEN IT IS COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT. I GAVE NO ONE PERMISSION TO USE MY BOOK AND HAVE NOT POSTED IT ANYWHERE ELSE, SO... YA. REPORT THAT BOOK. Thanks. ~Rissa
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