Melody
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Ongoing<5 mins
Last published Fri, Oct 24, 2014
This is sad poem based around the theme of death.
After reading this piece I would be very happy if you commented and maybe voted. But only if it's good of course. However if it's bad you can still comment. I take criticism in any form :)
Also I would like you to tell me what the relationship between the person who has died and the author is?
Who had died?
Just to see if you are paying attention :)
XxIn addition this is a short poem so please read xx
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