Diablo's Ascent

Oliver Weils is a Detective in his home town. Cole Aldine is his partner. They've known each other for 8 years, only separating when Oliver went to college out of town for 4 years, reunited on the first day of their job together. Olivers life is turned upside down when multiple deaths occur, all from the same murderer. Oliver is on the brink of discovering mysterious elements of his ancestry, Cole's secrets are unraveling, and the murderer is getting closer. In other words, all hell is soon to be unleashed....

It's basically a story I did in one sitting which is why it's awful. Enjoy and feel free to give me advice!!! (none of the pictures are mine!!) I will be adding, subtracting and editing things, so sorry if there's any confusion!