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In the Caribbean, dark magic and witchcraft are talked about in whispers. While many don't believe the whispers, all fear it. On her 16th birthday, Calypso learns the family secret. The women are all Obeah's Daughters. They are all witches.
Calypso's grandmother, the cold and strict matriarch of the family, needs to teach Calypso everything about their past and how to be a witch. The training is physically and mentally draining, only made more difficult by the fact that Calypso is not a pure-blood.
Calypso must fight to prove herself to her grandmother, the other ancestors and to herself.
Noor, a dancer in the Royal Court of the Al-Yauzhan Empire wants nothing more than to pay off her debts and lead a nice, simple life-but a chance encounter with the crown prince and his brother brings her into the dangerous world of court politics. As Noor and the princes investigate their uncle and cousin's possible treason, she grows closer to the crown prince, but in order to save the kingdom and the person she loves, Noor will have to risk everything...
A romantic adventure set in an imagined Arabic kingdom, THE DANCING GIRL is a story of court intrigues, romantic entanglements, and secret meetings as Noor and her best friend Amir try to help the princes they're falling for expose corrupt court officials with plans to seize the throne. Noor and Amir are close to having everything they've ever dreamed of...now all they need to do is survive.