Hometown Horrors

NOTE: story is currently unfinished and put on the back burner because i need input so read and give opinions. it is a good amount of story and this is my first attempt at horror so i hope you like it!

In the small town of Crimson Pines, there is a secret. People live normal, happy lives but something sinister lurks just below the surface of this beautiful Massachusetts town.
Gabriel's life was on track, he had a steady job, a new apartment and had finally gotten the woman he had pined over since high school. But when his heart gets broken, he tries to take his own life and is forced to attempt to rebuild his life, but now he isn't alone.
A spectral doppleganger now never leaves his side, a companion that only he can see. As more and more people begin taking their own lives, Gabriel and his ghost twin begin to realize something dark is making people commit suicide.
Will Gabriel figure out the origin of the curse on his hometown or will he find himself taking his own life once again?