Too Much Space
- Reads 8
- Votes 2
- Parts 1
Complete Thu, Jan 7, 20216m
This is a short story where two souls lost in space find one another again. They've been alone drifting in the dark for so long they'd forgotten how it felt to be together. They feels things again and they love again. But why is everything moving so fast? Why are they slowing down? Why does it feel wrong?
This is something I wrote a really long time ago. Now it's been through countless drafts since then of me just revisiting and redoing the entire story so its very different from what it was. During that time I was going through a really depressed phase and although I did not intend for it to it definitely did show through in my writing. The first drafts often felt like a metaphor for depression and in some ways it still does but the ending is not a good one. I want to point out that if you yourself deal with depression this story may have a sad ending but yours doesn't. I've been through the worst of it and I can say that I felt like there was no way out and that it would never get better but it does. It doesn't get perfect but it gets easier.
Anyways I hope you enjoy the story and I really love feedback and would love to hear what you think and any comments you may have!
All Rights Reserved
#285
andromeda
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Phighting +(x?) You(Reader)
A fanfic for the Phighting! game on Roblox. Anyways I have no idea about half the lore, so someone inform me, please. The world hasn't felt so dark before. You feel yourself in water drowning until you see a light that grabbed you out of the water. Welcome newly spawned phighter to your new life. (Rewrite version) V Friends, family, lovers, people whom you wish you had in your life. You have them now and going through the rocky path for them. You loved and lost, always a cycle of that. You only wanted what was best for them, you try to give them what they wanted, even if it wasn't what they expected to have. Deep down in this abyss, could you really think you could hide it all from above the surface? If they founded out of this secret, they'd never look at you the same way. Are you willing to risk that?
Rekindled | ✓
NOTE : It's a sequel to "Lost" and cannot be read as a standalone. ● ♡ ● "Are there any stars?" She inquires and he doesn't understand what she meant. There were no stars. "Can you see the moon up there?" She continues. There was no moon. "It's dark." Ayansh replies when he sees her waiting for his response. Inaaya turns her gaze to him, a peculiar look swimming in her eyes. "Exactly." Ayansh looks back at her, more confusion getting painted over his face. "It's dark. No stars, no moon, nothing." Inaaya adds solemnly. "That's how we're and that's how things between us stand. I trusted you and you broke it and that's the end. There's no hope or light here. All there ever will be around is despair." Ayansh listens to her and after a moment, carefully, takes a step ahead and a slight relief washes over him when she doesn't flinch. "Look up again." He whispers and after a little reluctance, she follows. "Surely it's dark," he says as she watches the sky ardently. "But it doesn't promise to be dark forever," he murmurs lowly and her heart thuds against her ribcage at the determination his voice held. "It's dark today but tomorrow? Maybe tomorrow, there will be stars and the moon too. Maybe tomorrow, you can see the light and the hope too. Maybe tomorrow, the despair would fade away." 🥀 That's the thing about soulmates; they always find a way to each other. ALWAYS. Ayansh Mehra and Inaaya Rai were a little naive, a little foolish in love but oh, they were so in love and it would be a shame if they couldn't find their way back to each other, to the arms they belong, to their HOME.Complete
DAKSHIKA
"Sshhhhh....." he hushed and pinned us against the wall leaving no space between us. I held onto his biceps with my hand in reflex. He shook his head lightly signalling me not to scream. But did not remove his palm, awaiting confirmation I guessed. I nodded a little locking eyes with him fearfully. I witnessed a glimmer in his eyes and he removed his palm from my mouth slowly. I mustered up a little strength and asked nervously. "Kon hai aap aur yahan kya kar rhe hain," His eyes softened, looking deep into my eyes as if he could see through them as if he owned them. A strong wind surfaced, pulling away the fabric and revealing his face. It was him. My heartbeats raced wildly. He flickered his gaze to my lips for a few seconds, licked his lower lip a little with an unreadable emotion and peered back deeply into my eyes, delving into my soul. He replied in the raw, masculine and resonating voice I had heard months before. "Daksh naam hai hamara. Vivaah karne aaye hai aapse," *** I could not believe my eyes that he was standing right in front of me. The day I walked away from him, with a swarm of butterflies in the depths of my guts and belly, I never considered the possibility of crossing our paths again. I never thought we would get another chance in this life. Was it a wise decision of me to run away back then like that? The moments we shared back then flashed back into my memory. I started wondering if this was a coincidence or if he purposely located me. *** This is the love story of Daksh Pratap Rathore and Radhika Maan Singh. Storyline occurs in early years of 21st century(2001). A love saga bridging the gap between a city-born man and a village-raised girl. They are soulmates longing for love and solace from each other in different parameters. Let us dive into their journey of togetherness, and internal conflicts and see if and how they find solace with each other. First 2 chapters can be descriptive but I'm sure you'll like the story further.Complete
My Milky Way
Everything starts with something. You put your step forward and go on an adventure through the cosmos. Somehow along the way you meet these people that going to change you, will leave traces of theirs in your heart forever. Before you met them, the universe, you, and everything else was all different. Then there this explosion erupts in your galaxy. Stars collapse, planets disappear, all life fades away. Then, out of nowhere, a bright light appears, which transforms everything in its path. It begins to give birth to new stars, planets, comets, life, and dreams... It creates your own Milky Way... You start to see the universe in a different way. Now stars are brighter, planets are more lively, cosmos is in big harmony. This feeling you witness through your journeys makes everything valuable for you. Now travelling is more passionate, more unique and more fascinating.] The Milky Way now appears to be very amazing. This isn't the Milky Way we're used to seeing. This is the Milky Way that exists in his heart. Because he met her through the Milky Way... This is the adventure along the Milky Way. The way all travellers go through to find something meaningful, face challenges, see different species and have fun...Complete
The Golden 30 Last Seconds
The Golden 30 Last Seconds "0 minutes and 59 seconds." I say out loud. They all look at me, confused. "That's how long I have before they come. I'm sorry I didn't ell you earlier, Brook and Blake." I look at Jason who has sadness, disbelief, despair, guilt, and loneliness mixed in one on his face. I tilt my head at him. Why does he feel guilty? It's not his fault that thy are here. It's mine. But why is he angry? "Jason did you tell Brook?" He shakes his head, not meeting my gaze. I sigh. "Please tell Blake and Brook While I'm Gone." Jason's eyes snap up to mine. "Gone? Where are you going? Aren't you coming back?" He says with panic in his voice. I look at my friends one by one. "Thirty seconds." I whisper to my best friends a moment before I teleport out of the space ship.Complete
The Love That Hurts (#Billionaire's Obsession) | ✓
"𝑻𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒘𝒂𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚 𝒇𝒊𝒓𝒔𝒕 𝒑𝒂𝒈𝒆, 𝑵𝒐𝒕 𝒘𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒚 𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒆 𝒆𝒏𝒅𝒔" •••• "Don't lie, Amisha. I'm sick of these lies. And if you're so sure that you didn't cheat on me, then fine, let's move on to the next step,prove me you didn't cheated on me" he said, and she frowned in confusion. He realized she didn't understand his intention. "Get intimate with me, tell me that you love me, and I'll believe you. I'll believe that you're telling the truth," he said, or more precisely, made an offer. She couldn't process his words. Her heart broke as she listened to him. •••• His expression darkened, pain flickering in his eyes. "Kya kami reh gayi thi, Amisha? Sab kuch diya tha tumhe... apna dil tumharee kadmon mein rakha tha. Fir bhi tumne yeh kiya?" His words came out in a choked whisper, his composure slipping. (Was there anything I didn't give you, Amisha? I gave you everything... I placed my heart at your feet. And still, you did this) Tears gathered in his eyes, though he struggled to maintain his demeanor, reminding himself he couldn't afford to be soft. "You're hurting me," she whispered, her voice cracking slightly. His eyes flickered with guilt, but he didn't let go. "And what about the hurt you caused me?I loved you, Amisha. I gave you everything. My heart, my soul... everything. And still, you didn't choose me." Tears welled up in her eyes. "You should have looked into my eyes once, it was always you Vivaan. But your jealousy... your obsession... it's destroying us."Complete
Izhaar ~ Sanity to my Insanity and Peace to my Chaos.
"To the heartbeat that quickens at your touch, a melody only our souls can truly dance to......." IZHAAR: Sanity to my Insanity and Peace to my Chaos. (Book-1) Safar-e-Izhaar series. Story of Aarav and Adwitya. AARAV SINGH RAICHAND A 27 year old, Billionaire CEO of Raichand Companies (India and Abroad) may come across as grumpy to the world, but deep down, he's a total sweetheart when it comes to his family. Despite his tough exterior, Aarav's love and care for his loved ones shine through, making him lovable and endearing. His family is lucky to have such a kind-hearted and affectionate person in their lives. ADWITYA MEHRA A 25 years old, finance analyst, is a delightful mix of sweet and sassy. She's naturally shy but has a heart of gold, always being sweet to those who show her kindness. However, don't be fooled by her gentle demeanor, because if someone tries to mess with her, her sassy side comes out to play. Adwitya knows how to hold her own and won't hesitate to give a sassy comeback when needed. She's charming and dynamic, who adds a touch of sweetness and spice to any situation. The Tropes of the Book💫 Arrange Marriage Billionaire Romance Desi Romance Secret Pining Grumpy x Sunshine Let the Universe decide what is written in their stars ✨ Read "IZHAAR" to learn about their journey of love.Complete
Love In Rain
──── ⋆ ˚｡⋆ ꪆৎ ˚ "Who do you belong to?" Her cold, demanding eyes met mine, The only glimmer of light within them was my own reflection staring back at me. "You." My voice trembled as I whispered the answer. She settled herself on my lap, surrounding me with her intoxicating scent, as if to claim ownership. "Exactly," she confirmed, her tone possessive. "You burnt her. Alive" A horrified sigh escaped my lips as my heart pounded in my chest. "And you had the perfect orgasm right next to her burning body. Do you know why? You were focused on me. She was screaming and yet you craved me. You begged me to touch you more. You needed me. Her cries for help, her screams, her burning body; nothing affected you. You just craved me" Her grip on my shirt tightened as she pulled me closer, her voice dropping to a dangerous whisper. ────୨ৎ──── NAINA MALHOTRA, A fierce and determined woman, driven by a powerful desire for revenge. Her singular focus fueled her every action, and she pursued her path with relentless determination and unshakable fortitude. "His embrace felt like the first burst of sunlight after a long, dark storm" AARAV MURTY, A kind and compassionate soul, radiating warmth and care towards everyone. He concealed his own struggles behind a bright smile, convinced that everyone deserves love and affection. "I've never taken a life before, but for you, I'd cross that boundary and step into darkness a thousand times" Naina and Aarav, lost in love, were oblivious to their family's secrets. As those truths and lies started to surface, their bond was put to the test. Could their love withstand the storm of their haunted history? A saga of twisted enigma played by masters of manipulation where noone can be trusted. Will love survive? ⋆ ˚｡⋆ ꪆৎ ˚ P.S- The initial chapters are highly unedited but I promise it gets better <3
Decaying Hope
On a hostile planet with a destroyed core and plagued by a toxic storm, a story lives, among many others. This one in particular, though, is a story of a stranger, who's stranded on this hostile planet for...unknown reasons; a girl, who teaches her the ropes and helps her survive, as well as a few other characters they meet along the way. Every moment is a moment where their lives may be suddenly cut short, every moment a moment to tread carefully, to be cautious, to try to stretch the remaining time in their life out just a little longer for a purpose unknown to them. After all, there's no rest for the Damned. Hello, there, reader! Thanks for taking your time to check out at least the front page of my story. This is a fanfic based in the universe of the Roblox game "Decaying Winter." Even if you aren't a fan of the game and/or know anything about the game or not, this story will still paint a unique world for you! I promise that this story is different from any other story you may pick on this site (*cough cough* it has good grammar *cough cough*), so please do take at least a peek! Anyways, enjoy the story, and be sure to give me feedback! My discord user is "madam_bork", if ya want to contact me, just send me a friend request!
「星に願いを」 (When You Wish Upon a Star) : Part Ω
I woke up in a world that shouldn't exist. And in a body that isn't mine. The city around me is in ruins-silent streets, broken buildings, a sky that no longer remembers the sun. I don't know how I got here. I don't know who I am. My memories slip through my fingers like sand, leaving behind only fragments-whispers of a promise I can't remember making. But something is wrong. The world feels... stuck, repeating itself like a broken record. Shadows move where they shouldn't. Time bends in ways I can't explain. And the deeper I search for answers, the clearer it becomes-this isn't just about me. There's something out there, buried in the loops of time. Watching. Waiting. If I break free, will I find the truth? Or will I disappear like everything else? When the stars grant a wish, what do they take in return?Complete
A fanfic for the Phighting! game on Roblox. Anyways I have no idea about half the lore, so someone inform me, please. The world hasn't felt so dark before. You feel yourself in water drowning until you see a light that grabbed you out of the water. Welcome newly spawned phighter to your new life. (Rewrite version) V Friends, family, lovers, people whom you wish you had in your life. You have them now and going through the rocky path for them. You loved and lost, always a cycle of that. You only wanted what was best for them, you try to give them what they wanted, even if it wasn't what they expected to have. Deep down in this abyss, could you really think you could hide it all from above the surface? If they founded out of this secret, they'd never look at you the same way. Are you willing to risk that?
More detailsContent Guidelines