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Complete, First published Jan 07, 2021
This is a short story where two souls lost in space find one another again. They've been alone drifting in the dark for so long they'd forgotten how it felt to be together. They feels things again and they love again. But why is everything moving so fast? Why are they slowing down? Why does it feel wrong?

This is something I wrote a really long time ago. Now it's been through countless drafts since then of me just revisiting and redoing the entire story so its very different from what it was. During that time I was going through a really depressed phase and although I did not intend for it to it definitely did show through in my writing. The first drafts often felt like a metaphor for depression and in some ways it still does but the ending is not a good one. I want to point out that if you yourself deal with depression this story may have a sad ending but yours doesn't. I've been through the worst of it and I can say that I felt like there was no way out and that it would never get better but it does. It doesn't get perfect but it gets easier. 

Anyways I hope you enjoy the story and I really love feedback and would love to hear what you think and any comments you may have!
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DAKSHIKA

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"Sshhhhh....." he hushed and pinned us against the wall leaving no space between us. I held onto his biceps with my hand in reflex. He shook his head lightly signalling me not to scream. But did not remove his palm, awaiting confirmation I guessed. I nodded a little locking eyes with him fearfully. I witnessed a glimmer in his eyes and he removed his palm from my mouth slowly. I mustered up a little strength and asked nervously. "Kon hai aap aur yahan kya kar rhe hain," His eyes softened, looking deep into my eyes as if he could see through them as if he owned them. A strong wind surfaced, pulling away the fabric and revealing his face. It was him. My heartbeats raced wildly. He flickered his gaze to my lips for a few seconds, licked his lower lip a little with an unreadable emotion and peered back deeply into my eyes, delving into my soul. He replied in the raw, masculine and resonating voice I had heard months before. "Daksh naam hai hamara. Vivaah karne aaye hai aapse," *** I could not believe my eyes that he was standing right in front of me. The day I walked away from him, with a swarm of butterflies in the depths of my guts and belly, I never considered the possibility of crossing our paths again. I never thought we would get another chance in this life. Was it a wise decision of me to run away back then like that? The moments we shared back then flashed back into my memory. I started wondering if this was a coincidence or if he purposely located me. *** This is the love story of Daksh Pratap Rathore and Radhika Maan Singh. Storyline occurs in early years of 21st century(2001). A love saga bridging the gap between a city-born man and a village-raised girl. They are soulmates longing for love and solace from each other in different parameters. Let us dive into their journey of togetherness, and internal conflicts and see if and how they find solace with each other. First 2 chapters can be descriptive but I'm sure you'll like the story further.