tawog: the box (my take)

tawog: the box (my take)

  • WpView
    Reads 208
  • WpVote
    Votes 9
  • WpPart
    Parts 8
WpMetadataReadOngoing51m
WpMetadataNoticeLast published Sat, Nov 12, 2022
It is based on the British_ American cartoon: The Amazing World of Gumball. Recently I just watched the episode "The Box" and I found it somewhat disappointing and wanted to change the lackluster parts and make one story the main story; so this is just my version on what would've happened if Nicole's desire for what was in the box actually was true. I thought Nicole's story was pretty wild and fun and it felt really cool that there was money in the box and a hitman actually came after them and tried to kill them. Note: I will be changing somethings from what was presented in Nicole's segment but more in the actual presentation and adding some events I thought would've been better to see. If you get confused where was this in the actual episode, remember it's just my story.
All Rights Reserved
#279
tawog
WpChevronRight
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
Illustration

You may also like

  • Shadow Wagner The Slayer - Do I Belong? (Book 1)
  • Rob x Reader {Null & Void}
  • Fourty million dollar, Baby (16+) - a Tom Holland fan fiction | partially edited
  • The Curse of the Yetteeth - A TAWOG Tale
  • ...
  • The Gift: A TAWOG Story
  • The Therapist
  • A Game of Cat and Fox
  • The Mansion

This story is complete, though incomplete. For elaboration, I have completed it how I wanted it, in the sense of me working and chipping away at it to get it printed off for my father to read, seeing as he wanted to read, edit, and attempt to get it published (He had called a publishing company the other day about it). Incomplete in the sense that I don't have all the scenes I really want now more than I did when I was in the process of writing it. For example, in the previous chapter one, there was a small scene that had Aaren, Travis, Loyd, Scott, Gabe, and Xander fighting in Lord Sylvie's house. I had changed it so that they moved outside, seeing as I imagined Sylvie's house as a small, quaint house, so it would only make sense that they all fought OUTSIDE instead of INSIDE. Also incomplete in the sense that I strongly dislike the way I wrote it. I've gotten some 'inspiration' from my dad about (spoiler) killing her in the end, so I came back to change it before we went into really editing the pages (grammar, spelling, etc). That's all I really wanted to communicate with you guys, so if you remember something specific about the previous book, I changed it because I disliked how it wrote it. Hope you enjoy it for what it is otherwise. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A young girl, Shadow Gillian Wagner, avoids Rosewood at all costs. In fact, she avoids all villages, expect for one that changed her. Shadow, and her two companions, Xander and Gabe, had been taken to Acorntop village, where they have good and bad moments, love and war. Though 'war', might literally. What will happen on this interesting adventure of the girl and her friends? Find out in 'Shadow Wagner the Slayer; Book 1 (Do I Belong?)'

More details
WpActionLinkContent Guidelines