Lasting Notion
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It's kind of a hypothetical version of sinners repenting. You don't have to be Christain to read it. It's in more of a classic style, short only because I tried to branch out my vocabulary while writing this. Hope you enjoy it! Let me know what you think!
There aren't really main characters cuz it's really short and none have names.
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