I love him. (Karlnap)

So uh I will take this down if no one likes it this is my first time trying to right a whole story but
I'm trying to make it not that inappropriate like other I might do some smut
But that's all also the names I'm using
Bad-Darryl
Skeppy-Zak
Sapnap-Nick
Karl jacobs-Karl
Dream-Clay
Georgenotfound-George
Fundy-floris
Hbomb-Liam
Tommyinnit-thomas
Tubbo-toby
Wilbur-Will
Philza Minecraft-Phil
Technoblade-Dave
Ranboo-Mark
jared-jared

Yes I'm using there real name but I'm shipping there Minecraft skins
It might be a good book but I need feedback for if I should delete it
Also it takes place in school, Home, Work/office,stores and when i say tubboinnit i mean friendship
Have a fun time reading :)