The Fallen (Full version on Galatea)

The Fallen (Full version on Galatea)

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Liz Howard only ever wanted to be a cop. Having grown up in witness protection with her mother hiding from her father's enemies, she could never forget that her father shamed their good name with his deeds. This galvanizes her to put everything into her job, studying at night to further her career, becoming one of the youngest detectives in her precinct with the highest solve rate, the most commendations, and a straight path to do so much more. Then she messes with the wrong cartel and wakes up in the desert to discover just how quickly everything she worked for could be taken away. Version 3 Available on Galatea in the thriller section under CSDreamer.
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Egon is said to be the key, to hold the power to overthrow Vestomer, the wicked ruler of Magur, but he feels useless. With his power still not developed and a new life he's been swept into, how can he fulfill this destiny everyone wants for him. Mace is forced to spy on his friends, weaseling his way into their life and corroding them with his lies, all to keep his lover alive. Rayner is torn between the orders of his brain and the orders of his heart, if he ignores love he may loose it forever. Ceridwen is running out of time and if she can't find the ingredients to craft the potion, she'll never recuse her family. Theresa is poisoned with the sight of the future and as the dreams come in an uncontrollable wave, can she escape the vision she sees, the vision of death and destruction The Children are running out of time and Vestomer's plan for distruction is forming. They must journey to an outpost just beyond the Kingdom of Magur's borders to gather the help of Magic Born, to create the potion and release the imprisoned Magic Born, to Over throw the King. •••••••••••••••••• best rank #102 ( in adventure ) best rank #177 (in fantasy ) •••••••••••••••••• Comment/FeedBack "After reading this, I voted right away because honestly...you left me pretty much speechless!" @KevinXValentine "It bloody brilliant I, I can't put It down!" -ScorpioUK248 "Very good story, enjoying every bit of it, and even more so is the fact that it keeps getting better!!!" -AdeAlaoOluwaferanmiA "I started reading while my breakfast was cooking, I couldn't stop!! Now my breakfast is cold!!" -CintiaJCajal "I'm enjoying this story a lot so far. It always keeps me on edge and I never get bored of reading it!!" -AsiaPyne

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