A Rising Star
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  • Reads 1,109
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  • Parts 19
  • Time 1h 32m
Complete, First published Jan 26, 2021
Mature
I give credit to E L James for her great books and characters. Anastasia Rose Steele was a unique baby and her mother Carla Ann Steele. Her father Raymond David Steele  was a career military man. Carla stayed either in California or New York where ever the jobs took her. Ana was born not only under a lucky star, but she had a star birthmark which was on her forehead. It made people look and realize how beautiful she was even the star couldn't diminish her beauty. She was photographed often, people paid for her photographs. She was a money maker and Carla made sure she was at all the right places. Raymond had no idea his wife was using Ana to make money. He was always in a skirmish or black ops. 
Christian Grey was six years old when Ana was born. He was the son of a doctor and an attorney he has three siblings. Grace and Carrick Grey stopped after number four. Elliott was their first born, Christian their second, Mia their third and Laura the last daughter she was born the same day Ana was and had a star birthmark as well. Her mother used a bit of concealer to cover up the star on her daughters forehead.
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