Two-time comet

This is just a short story I had to write for English (school) and we could write anything but it had to be a maximum of 1500 words long and had to start with 'the highs street was deserted'. I had finished the first draft when I realised that it was a bit like Your Name (the film, it's great you should watch it if you haven't already) but I felt it was already too late to change it so I just carried on. It's pretty short so give it a read if you want!