Agent Hubba Bubba : The Mystery of the missing snowman

So I am writing this story for my school, I thought it was weird and kind of cute, with a dash of funny! So I decided I would share it on here, Hopping it would bring a smile to someone's face, or make a cute kids laugh! I read the story to my little sister, she laughed the hole way throe! She is all so very opinionated, so I may have taken advise from my 6 year old sister. . . But hey! I made it to make kids laugh and that it was it has done. I'm all so asking for your help, I would like you, as you read this, to pick out anything weird or wrong with my grammar. I'm a first time writer and need all the help I can get! So basically this whole rant was to say: Judge this book and Judge it hard!

Carry on. . .

"In my life there is never a dull moment"
From the Start of this Mystery, spy book, you will be glue to the screen. Following the Mystery of the missing snowman, you will get to live like a real spy and Detective. Will they solve the case or will it all just crumble? I guess you will have to read and find out!