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You know how you read a story and you wish- no, HOPE- that there is a review, but there isn't one? Well, I can help you.
My name is Gray. No, you are not reading it wrong, let me just say my dad is not a light drinker and my mom didn't want to change the name, since I have a twin brother William that stuck to her hip like glue.
But anyways, I am the person to fulfill your dreams! I review books, and I'm an author! So, send me a persons- or your own- story, and I'll read it, finished or unfinished, and review it!
I do give constructive criticism and tell my thoughts, so if you don't like harsh realities, I suggests you run far away from me.
Cuz baby, the Grim Reaper ain't got nothing on me when it comes to death notes.
Later Death Breath, this is my job!
I UPDATE ONCE A WEEK MY LOVELIES, SO BE FREAKING PATIENT!
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