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So.. i wanna write a book.. and i got tons of ideas but don't know which I should use and how. 
I'm gonna give some basic information and you just.. like comment. please? idk 

(it's not like this will get reads anyways... who would want to read notes for a book when you can read ff)All Rights Reserved

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.''Are you dead serious?''. by ChrisWolfblood

I've watched her for a long time... Ever since she was born and up until now.... I'm timeless and eternal but alone... My job is not the best but someone needs to do it while gods simply watch from above... Leaving the dirty work for me... But even I can't let this happen to her...Never... Death will not come for her. (This is an old story, don't expect to see my current writing skills in them lol)

A Whole Different Life (Book I) by TheBluester

"What would you rather? Floating in eternal darkness or...serving me? As my champion?" "Honestly? Neither, why in the world would I choose to be a servant in my next life?!" "Hm, then I suppose-" "Wait, I wasn't finished." She let out a sigh, trepidation heavy in my mind. She's spent her entire life in a world that was 50/50 for her...school was rough but she had companions. Her home life was great but it had its ups and downs. She was beautiful! But...she didn't feel that way. Perhaps another life could give her that? A sense of renewal, a chance to be someone better and greater than the person she originally was. "But! I'll take the latter, I could use a change. A chance to be a different me is always appreciated. After all, it's not like I'm going to be a world-renowned hero right?" ___________ What happens when you die? Do you go to a religious after-life? Do you simply float in black nothingness or do you wake up in the body of another person? Well...for 17-year old Eos Theodoric, a girl who died in a tragic car accident, she knows the answer. Waking up in the body of an animal in service to an Animal Guardian who lives in a different world known as Balerion! Get ready for this one, a fantasy life isn't what it seems! Warning(s): This book may contain descriptions of torture of a slightly graphic nature, sexual innuendos, mentions of rape in a chapter and possibly some graphic death scenes!

Fight Scene by Spooky_Nana

A writing practice I recently finished, but now REALLY wanna make into a full story- but from the villain's perspective Hope you enjoy! Comment if you wanna see more

A Blade Among Feathers by Georgie037

This is only a sample of my draft for my story that I am writing. I am planning on rewriting this story entirely into a different setup, but I would still like people to be able to read the original plan for what would hopefully become a published series. I hope you all enjoy what I have written as it is not fanfiction, but something out of my own imagination. Please leave comments and give me advise on what I have written (the lord knows I need it). Also, please understand what will be posted here is what I have written before I decided to go down a different route on this story. But anyway, please enjoy it and give criticism where necessary. Thanks

Fingers stained black by writing_sloth_

Many forget that the goddess of love was born from the raging sea, but she would do anything to protect her daughter. Adora was Aphrodite's last daughter. Her mother kept her hidden. But, her mother isn't the only one who can keep a secret, especially in a world where your role in society is everything. For there was a prophecy long before she was born: 'Aphrodite's last child would be the one to take the throne, Her paternity unknown. They would carve her face and never forget, for she would be the most beautiful that they had met Cursed for the same fate as her mother Forced to leave her love for another The only way she shall break this curse is if she defeats the first' "Looks like the princess doesn't need saving after all." He says, quietly enough that no one else would hear, as he draws his hand away from my arm. I glare back at him. "Maybe she never did," I walk away, not sparing a single glance back, no matter how much my body was begging me to. I fuss over my hair, pouting as I run my fingers through it to put it back into place. *A warning note* I am not an expert on Greek Mythology, but it interests me greatly. Please excuse any inaccuracies in the book, but if there are any please do message or comment it and I will see if I can change it without making such a huge difference to the plot. Also, my main character is autistic and the experience will be different for everyone. I have tried my hardest to put down on paper how I feel and how I believe others see me. So, please be respectful about the decisions my characters make as I have chosen to give them many different types of neurodivergent brains. I have tried my best to represent these in the most accurate light whilst not romanticising them.

Charmed [✔] by xxsoteria

Elise's life is never a bore. With unusual parents, mad scientist brothers, and a little sister who aspires to be a witch, who can say that she is ordinary? Just looking at her herb collection and extreme fascination with ancient medical treatments, no one can deny that peculiarity runs deep in her blood. But, who will have known that her so-called 'strange life' is actually the most normal thing she will experience? Gone with her dad's antiques, the daily fortune-telling of her mom's, the crazy inventions of her older brothers, and the voodoo dolls of her sister, everything is never the same after letting curiosity reign over herself. Gigantic creatures, people with magic, fairies with their beautiful wings, black-eyed demons, and animals who can turn into humans await her as she travels into a new world. A world that is a completely different place. A world where she doesn't belong. ...Or does she? The Emperor's Lineage of Elith Book One Featured on: Wattpad Fantasy © Copyrights Reserved 2020-2021

Ribbit and Reality by TotallyNotAkiii

Waking up on the edge of a cliff in an unknown world wasn't part of the plan. Neither was having absolutely no memory of how I got here. But here I am-confused, probably high, and screaming into the void. With no clue what to do next, I do what any sane person would: throw a tantrum, curse at the sky, and accidentally "befriend" a weird, tiny creature that may or may not be magical. Now, lost in a strange world with only my questionable survival instincts and a feathery menace at my side, I have one goal-figure out what the hell is going on. And maybe, just maybe... find my way home. If that's even possible. ===== My first story that's gone public feel free to criticise soo uhhh here-

A BLEND OF GENRES by Shreya_VA

Mentioned by @IndiaCentral, an official profile of Wattpad. For the story LOVE... #62 in Fantasy 1.HIS CURSED EXISTENCE (Do you believe in guardian angel ? What if you had a guardian demon instead?) 2. APOCALYPSE (When MACHINES are the masters) 3. WEIRD (A love virus is spreading in the air this valentine's day. What happens?) 4. LOVE (My impression of love) 5.THE STOLEN KISS (The prince kisses the princess. What happens next?) 6. SPY (Could you make the ultimate sacrifice for your motherland ? You are a spy...) I won't rate my story mature as it has nothing that any one doesn't need to know. I tried to be subtle about it and I believe there is no graphic violence and stuff.... But notify me readers if you find any.

*Twisted Fates: Love in the Shadows* by varu__27

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A Mage in Greek Myth by Kneel_Pheasant

After defeating the Demon King and earning her title as a hero, Elise finds herself unexpectedly thrust into a world of Greek mythology-a realm where gods are powerful but neither omniscient nor omnipotent. Among fickle immortals, ancient rivalries, and monstrous foes, Elise must navigate a world ruled by divine politics and chaos. Armed with her magic, courage, and wit, she forges unexpected alliances. As battles rage and secrets unravel, Elise must prove that her mortal strength can rival the power of gods and reshape their world forever. Hence, her fate with gods similar yet different from her own begins. ...... A/n: SELF INDULGENT HAHAHA, BUT I TRY TO RESEARCH(But like kinda surface level research, I havent read any theogony only google, reddit and quora are my source of knowledge) Made because I wanna create a non-harem greek myth self insert who is already powerful without the help of gods and also just wanna save some characters from EPIC THE MUSICAL.) Average of 2k words per chapter for nicer reading cuz wattpad got so many ads :)

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.''Are you dead serious?''.

I've watched her for a long time... Ever since she was born and up until now.... I'm timeless and eternal but alone... My job is not the best but someone needs to do it while gods simply watch from above... Leaving the dirty work for me... But even I can't let this happen to her...Never... Death will not come for her. (This is an old story, don't expect to see my current writing skills in them lol)