I want feedback please
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Ongoing6m
Last published Thu, Feb 4, 2021
So.. i wanna write a book.. and i got tons of ideas but don't know which I should use and how.
I'm gonna give some basic information and you just.. like comment. please? idk
(it's not like this will get reads anyways... who would want to read notes for a book when you can read ff)
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