I see it in your eyes
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Last published Wed, Apr 21, 2021
When Billy experiences his first glimpse into the future he has no idea of the import it will have upon his life.
As he grows older, the occurrences become less frequent but one day he sees his own future which leads him into new experiences.
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Written for the Open Novella Contest 2021 inspired by prompt #56
You can see the future by looking into people's eyes. However, if you tell them about it it won't come to fruition. One day, you lock eyes with yourself in the mirror.
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