Ricky Watson, Pseudo-Noir From A Hormone-addled Fourteen Year Old

Ricky Watson, Pseudo-Noir From A Hormone-addled Fourteen Year Old

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WpMetadataReadComplete Sat, Sep 3, 2016<5 mins
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Sherlock
I first incepted then wrote, deleted, revised, and rewrote "Ricky Watson" four years ago as a second-year high schooler who thought she knew all about mystery after reading a few pages of Sherlock Holmes and watching the series. After years of treating it as an afterthought, I've decided to finally publish this draft as maybe a springboard for future ideas to come, as well as a slightly cringy look at the past. I've decided to publish this draft unedited from how it was originally written, considering the little sentimental value "Ricky" has to me. If I were to revive it, I might write it as a completely different story.
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My Teddy

The corner of his mouth tilts upward slightly. I smile again. A smile!? A tiny one, but still. "Hm. So I got you to smile, that's progress, yeah? Can I get your name now?" I ask, swinging my feel a little. He shakes his head shyly, his mouth not moving at all. Geez! Why do I want to hear this dude talk so much? "Okay, that's fine. I can give you a nickname." I offer happily. He looks up from his book, raising his eyebrows. I just stare for a moment. He has nice eyes. Pretty brown chocolate orbs. They remind me so much of....... "Teddy." He shakes his head immediately, frowning. "What, why not? You remind me of my old teddy bear. He was a good listener and he didn't talk much..... just like you." I say softly, tilting my head. He continues to shake his head. I fold my arms, leaning back in my seat. "Yeah, it's definitely sticking. Teddy.....It has a nice ring to it, yeah?" He sighs, the first sound I have ever heard him make. "No." . . . *Jordan* Teddy!? Seriously!? She gave me a fucking NICKNAME!? What the hell does this girl want!? I stuff my hands into my pockets, walking down the busy street. Forget about her. She's just a annoying pretty girl, she'll go away. Everybody does. She HAS to go away. *Spoiler alert*: she doesn't. Don't get close to people or they'll end up getting hurt. That's my mindset. I've been through enough of that. This girl doesn't belong in my world anyway. She's too innocent. *Mature content* {Just a quick update, I am basically rewriting the story. I wrote it when I was in 8th grade and it makes me cringe every time I try to go back and edit it so keep in mind that it'll get better}

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