Okay, this is kind of a test book to see if I have the endurance and skills to write a book, so please comment what you think about it, suggestions are also welcome! Thanks!
Amber Lynora is training to become part of The Risvere, she wants to protect the world from the Keepers and fight for her people, but when Amber finds out that The Risvere's intentions aren't to protect, but to control, she, her brother Zev, and her best friend Deora set out to save everyone from two evil forces that threaten the safety of everyone. Death looms over their shoulders every second of the way, but Amber, with the help of her friend and a determined rebel, believes she can put a stop to the tyranny of The Risvere.
COMPLETED BOOK
I was trained to be a weapon for the kingdom. I was forced into servitude to the King after my family was ripped from me. My new life was covered in the blood of my family...and now I had to protect the royal family who ordered my parents' death. They're all monsters, except for him...he was my charge and as much as I wanted to hate him, the prince was nothing like his vicious father. He was a warm light in my cold and dark world. I was supposed to be controlled, cold, calculating and deadly, but he made me crave freedom, warmth and all the things I thought died with my family. I no longer knew my path...but I knew it led to him.
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Don't hesitate to let me know what you think of my book or if you see grammatical errors/plot holes!
*16+ is recommended...sex is implied but not described (I came up with that little rhyme while I was brushing my teeth this morning!) and there are scenes of violence.